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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Because it succeeds with the style you're going for. For example, I wouldn't be worried about the perspective on the hookah much more than you have already because, a lot of the time, with designs like yours, it's more about how aesthetically pleasing and thoughtful the image is, rather than how "correct" it is realistically speaking. As for the image itself, I like it the way it is, but have you considered adding colors to the hookah instead of just leaving it black and white? The image seems "safe" right now, perhaps even somewhat dull, and I think adding some of those primaries to the hookah would help liven it up. Also, your color choices are often muted and thoughtful, rather than "pretty;" hence, your style. It's not the first thing all teens would pick up to wear since it's much quieter (thought not worse, just different) than much sold to the teen demographic. What is your target audience?
To correct the slightly disheveled perspective, downsize the upper portion, tilt the front portion downward slightly, and add the background portion just above the front, and it would create the effect of one looking from a "downward" angle.